Instead I'll broadly state: The drive behind every character was unrealistic. And I'm not talking about the ghosts! I'm not going to do well giving examples without spoilers, so Im not going to try.

This story had great building blocks: Haunted motel, unsolved mystery, unresolved family history, female sleuths who confront the supernatural whilst solving these hitherto unknowns! I see the term 'fell flat' a lot in reviews. So perhaps there's a difference in target audience with this one(?), as well as a difference in my expectation as a fan of Simone St. I also don't understand the rave reviews! I did notice that a lot of the popular reviewers of this book have not reviewed any of this author's other works. James' other books with my utter disappointment in this one. CABLE TV! This is a fun, chilling, atmospheric read that captures beautifully how strange and frightening and freeing it might be to work the night shift.I'm having a hard time reconciling my adoration for Simone St. For example, Viv and Carly wear the same polyester vests the pool remains fenced off and closed, but not filled in and the flickering sign advertises VACANCY. James used the motel to symbolize what the families of the missing and murdered women endure – years going by with no resolution.

James introduced a threatening character in Carly’s timeline that just didn’t work for me, so while I enjoyed most of the book, I found the ending less engaging. Despite my frustration with the detective work, I enjoyed Viv and her interactions with a local photographer and the first woman on the Fell police force.

The mystery of the murdered and missing women is resolved rather unsatisfactorily – it involves some pretty big assumptions and then a lot of stalking this wasn’t the most compelling part of the novel for me. Both women observe potential supernatural events at the motel (paralleled in the narrative), which may be actual experiences or may be cognitive impairment from working on the night shift. Carly, who is cast adrift when her mother, Viv’s sister, dies, comes to Fell, NY, to try to unravel the mystery of her aunt’s disappearance. Viv is drawn into investigating a mystery involving several missing and murdered women because of eerie encounters at the motel. James, sat on my shelf for at least a week before I peeked at it, but once I peeked, I was hooked! The plot follows two women, one a night clerk at the Sun Down Motel in 1982 and the other the current night clerk, and switches between stories and timelines.Ĭarly, the current clerk, is the niece of Viv, who vanished while working in 1982. While I’ve been lurking and getting book ideas, I have had a terrible time focusing enough to write up any of the (few) books I’ve actually managed to finish – I blame the pandemic.

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